Shrapnel Valley, Gallipoli
4 May 1915
Today was the most challenging day of my life. My best
friend got shot in the arm and there were bullets
whizzing around my head. I quickly put the bandage
around his arm and got him down to the beach on a
stretcher and gave him to the medics.
I just wish this war would end and we could all go home.
By Felix
I liked how you put it in order.
ReplyDeletei like the way you put the bit when you said i wish the war would end so we all could go home.
ReplyDeletethat was a really cool piece of writing you have got From cayden
ReplyDeleteI like your writing because it has good describing words
ReplyDeletei liked thee way you said it was the most challenging day of my life on the first sentence you wrote down.
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